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Life Chisel
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Just tell me what you told me the first time we met
Just let your tongue slide; the pavement's so wet
Pretty pictures don't lie, but pretty eyes do
Your eyes are bleeding, but the blood is blue
CLUTCH ME...
As I re-enter the scar
SCRATCH ME...
As I find out who you are
GRASP ME...
I'm eating all your sins
HATE ME...
I'm the new demon within
Your screaming echoes off the wall and into my mind
I wonder if you bit down so hard everytime
The memories and miseries just seem to unwind
The moment, the second I leave you behind
CLUTCH ME...
As I re-enter the scar
SCRATCH ME...
As I find out who you are
GRASP ME...
I'm eating all your sins
HATE ME...
I'm the new demon within
I don't need you
I JUST WANT THIS
I take my life chisel
AND CARVE YOU A KISS
(the shadow on the ceiling
it just keeps growing
you just keep hiding
...the facts)
Your thoughts are still broken, you body's still white
I told you that I ****ed you at first sight
Now pretty pictures don't lie, but your eyes sure do
They just keep on bleeding, but the blood is clear blue
CLUTCH ME...
As I re-enter the scar
SCRATCH ME...
As I find out who you are
GRASP ME...
I'm eating all your sins
HATE ME...
I'm the new demon within
So go...
Return...
Let your mind wander
As the fields burn
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
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2005-07-16 18:15:39]
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Re: Life Chisel
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by waos on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:31:44 AM AEST
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That was a dark poem, but it had good rhythm which, combined with
the message, drew me right in and kept me there. It's terrifying to have
things like that take control of you. Good write.
~Kara |
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Re: Life Chisel
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 07:02:40 AM AEST
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Another poem that just lashes out at the reader and grabs their attention. This poem was powerful. This was brillant.
Take care
Christina |
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