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Emptiness
Contributed by
LolaWhite
on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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An emptiness
It's you I miss
My life, my joy
I reminisce
I see your face
Feel your embrace
But you no longer fill this space
Time ticks on and your'e not here
My heart longs to have you near
On your way to danger's side
I feel the tears I try to hide
Return to me is what I pray
But "I love you" is all that I can say.
Copyright ©
LolaWhite
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2005-07-16 15:25:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Emptiness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sexi_Lexi on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:26:56 PM AEST (User
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I really like ur poem i think that it is really sweet! |
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Re: Emptiness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST (User
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This is sad and touching thought provoking
a beautiful poem said in a delicate manner
and from the heart . . .
Ben |
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