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I Wish I Was Invisible
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to pretend
Like everything's okay
But I'm feeling like
I'm still scared
I open my eyes
And everything's just like yesterday
I don't even try to remember,
I still belong to you,
It's rattling inside me
Like pennies in a tin box
And I'm sitting here
With that look on my face
I wish I was invisible
All of a sudden...
I'm feeling sick inside
And I'm crying
In front of everybody
Even if I pretend
Like everything's ok...
It's too late.
I want to be far away already,
I wish I was invisible.
I dont know why:
You may be the one...
But your still the one that hurts me.
Copyright ©
flirtyrockstar
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2003-01-10 12:20:00]
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Re: I Wish I Was Invisible
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 04:56:24 PM AEST
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I want to be far away already,
I wish I was invisible.
I like those two lines they say a lot. I'm sure we've all felt like you've described. Its takes a while to get over someone you've loved or thought you've loved, but ya gotta keep yer chin up. Nice poem
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Re: I Wish I Was Invisible
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 04:58:23 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem...well done...wow... |
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Re: I Wish I Was Invisible
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 12:38:25 AM AEST
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| nicely put. I hope you got a high grade |
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