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Dreaming
Contributed by
bohemian_With_A_pen
on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:51:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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So here i am, awake once more
Surrounded by memories of you
ive been lying here for hours
no idea what i should do
Smiling seems to have gotton hard
And Ive forgotten how to breathe
Enough pain to smother a million souls
Why did you have to leave
chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame
i want to say i never meant,
all the awful things i said,
and to see you in my dreams,
is the best relief i get.
i'm dying slowly without you,
i can't do this on my own,
i don't know how i've managed,
to survive this long alone
chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame
You're with me when im sleeping
I wonder if thats a sign
And although i wake up screaming
I'll keep dreaming until you're mine..
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2005-07-16 05:51:00]
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Re: Dreaming
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:09:47 AM AEST
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Very sad but very well said. I'm so sorry for your loss. I jus lost a friend not long ago.
Luv, prayers, strength,
emy |
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Re: Dreaming
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:02:35 AM AEST
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Touching write indeed.
Very heart-breaking and I can very much relate to your feelings of sorrow.
Beautiful write though, all the best to you.
May your friend Rest In Peace. |
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Re: Dreaming
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by zenaprincess on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:14:31 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful write...
Zena |
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Re: Dreaming
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:47:07 AM AEST
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Wow... Great poem. Death to the young is such a terrible thing. To say I'm sorry is not enough, but it's all I have.
Take care.
David |
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