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I-NEED-TO-SLEEP!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 07:21:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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There used to be days, where I got so drained,
That I had to sleep deadly solid for days,
Just to not feel drained.
… I used to sleep in constantly.
And my moods would drop when I woke at 7:30am.
When it was time for school, and I’d be drowsy and dead.
And then in school my head would be on my desk…
I was so dead!
… Now months have passed,
And pulled me down.
And it’s harder to sleep,
Emotion-less-I’m-bound.
I sit up all night.
Or lie in bed, awake.
My body feels numb.
And all over I ache.
This morning I got to sleep,
At 6:45.
Slept for a weary 2 hours,
… Waking up around about 9:00…
My body can’t cope,
But neither can it sleep.
I’ve had the sleeping pills,
… And they made me grumpy and weak…
I keep feeling so low,
So floppy and unclean.
I need to re-fresh.
I-NEED-TO-SLEEP!
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Re: I-NEED-TO-SLEEP!
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 07:49:04 PM AEST
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your style went with the emotion of being sleep deprived that is the worst feeling in the world
Michelle |
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Re: I-NEED-TO-SLEEP!
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by horseluver on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:46:31 PM AEST
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good write with lots of outright frustration from lack of sleep..keep on spilling it all out in poems (and maybe see a doctor.... could be a sleep disorder or depression.....?)
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Re: I-NEED-TO-SLEEP!
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:48:26 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem, i feel the same way...ALL the time, now when im up at nite i will have somethin to read rather than just sitting there. ^_~...thanks :-) |
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