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Take The Chance
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lonely the heart
That never opens
Sad the spirit
That never soars
Fear of pain
Foils freedom
Locked in self-made cage
Lost to joys
Pity the soul
That never lets loose
And takes the chance
Of loving
Without the bitter
We would not know
The sensuous flavor
Of the sweet
Without daring
We are shells
Of what we could
Achieve
Fly soar high
Love with all
Your heart
Dance the dance
Take the chance
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Re: Take The Chance
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by purplestary on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:19:22 PM AEST
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this is beautiful.....i love these two stanza's
Without the bitter
We would not know
The sensuous flavor
Of the sweet
Without daring
We are shells
Of what we could
Achieve
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Re: Take The Chance
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:52:40 PM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: Take The Chance
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:29:18 PM AEST
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It takes a big personality to dare take chances in life and accept the "losses" or "wins" that it might bring. Nothing is certain and we only know if we take the chance.
Feel close to this one atm as I am meeting me new love tomorow for first time. Just got out a bad marriage and taking a chance with this one. Tho still a lot of hurt on me end but I feel this person is worth the try.
So I will Dance the Dance and take the chance ;-)
Lovely written!
Hugsss,
Nats. |
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Re: Take The Chance
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:06:14 PM AEST
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ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!! You have us all beaten my dear when it comes to few and fewer words. You can say more with just a couple, and they really make good sense. I just can 't explain to you how my thoughts and my heart soared as I was reading this!!!
Live, live, live. Be alive, and feel it all. Don't miss one minute.......it will be gone forever more! I've always lived not just each moment, but each second. I'm a glutton, I didn't miss a thing, even when it was bad, I run it through my heart several times, felt, it, lived through it...........and then got on with living and feeling each second all over again!
I pity those that haven't the courage it takes to live...............they will die unfulfilled, but some like it way. Not me..........when I go.....my whole grave will be filled!!!!!
Warm love
consue
See how you inspired Shari..........I must write all this down and write a poem about just loving to live! Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeego for it!!!
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Re: Take The Chance
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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Oh how very lovely, Shari. Yes, when you suffer hurt it is so easy to hide away and say 'never again.' I did at first. Now I have learned that I would rather dance and take the chance than miss out on another beautiful love in my life. Life is so short, it should be as happy as possible. Beautiful words, milady.
Rita |
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Re: Take The Chance
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by venkat on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:24:05 AM AEST
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| Golden lines..:-) venkat |
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