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Writing the Human Song

Contributed by Wannabe on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:34:03 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Another soul gone cold
Because it’s been told
Your daddy’s gone away
Where he shall stay

The product of revolution
For which there is solution
Though it requires commitment
And not more resentment

It necessitates a woman’s heart
To make its very start
For that woman to care
About the child she did bare

We’re talking about reality
Not some new formality
Where we accept
Without further regret

That a child needs two
Both me and you
To the design hold true
For we are the glue

That bonds this child’s mind
To the notion of human kind
Or else the family does pay
Each and every day

And as time goes by
We’ll start to wonder why
Our lives are so much harder
Without a caring father

And as the family dies
We’ll learn new lies
That say we are okay
When another goes astray

So in our old age
We’ll call upon the sage
To tell us why
We’re going to die

Rather than to a partner turn
For which our heart will yearn
As we realize that we need
More than a carrier of seed

To guide us through life
And show us to wife
As we carry on
Writing the human song

Copyright Â© Wannabe ... [ 2005-07-15 11:34:03]
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Re: Writing the Human Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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I like it, well done

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