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The Kid In You
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:10:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Persuaded hearts
Come to the forefront
Emulated motions and words
Preside over a gathering of hurts
Unite the second soul with its first
A touch of talent
Where instinct leaves off
For once the challenge
Has wept into the damp cloth
Suffocate the trachea
The blood pours with a cough
Improbable odds
The likelihood of a star
Sustaining a system
With a unitary tendency
To float like the butterfly
To sting like the bee
A mixture of science
And a cosmic reality
New born sleeping babies
Possess the answers
They maintain the balance
As the dead are dearly departed
A moment of silence
In the mind of the infant
Is infinite wisdom
No coherent communication
Entitles the child to grow
Crumb by crumb
And forget
In order to end the search
Which never begun
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jyssvw22
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2005-07-15 11:10:30]
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Re: The Kid In You
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:29:28 PM AEST
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Wow...love the flow of this one jyss...very intriguing and in your face. Very good!
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Re: The Kid In You
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:03:26 PM AEST
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"New born sleeping babies
Possess the answers
They maintain the balance
As the dead are dearly departed
A moment of silence
In the mind of the infant
Is infinite wisdom"
How much truth is this??
If truth were space,
then these few lines are universal;
infinite space required.
"The collected works of jyssvw22"
Man...would I love to read that..
Great work..
B
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