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What if............
Contributed by
DAVIS
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:11:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What if I told you a story,
timeless in its own way?
What if I told you a story,
that doesn't happen everyday?
What if I told you a story,
full of romance?
What if I told you a story,
of two people taking a chance.
What if I told you a story,
of a love without compare?
What if I told you a story,
no one else could share?
What if I told you a story,
of a passion once lost?
What if I told you a story,
of a passion returned at all cost?
What if I told you a story,
where hope became our foe?
What if I told you a story,
of my heart dying long ago?
What if I told you a story,
of my being reborn?
What if I told you a story,
of a mended love, that was torn?
What if I told you a story,
of a deed not done before?
What if I told you a story,
of how I'm waiting outside your door?
What if I told you a story,
of your destiny...to be my wife?
What if I told you a story,
of how I hold in my hand....the ring of life?
If I told you,.............would you say, "Yes"..................
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DAVIS
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2005-07-15 10:11:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What if............
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nobrainer on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:21:43 AM AEST (User
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I'm never really sure what to post in these things but..
i liked it.. it was..such a sweet poem..interesting flow to it.. good job
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Re: What if............
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:21:09 PM AEST (User
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Wow, beautifully written, loved it. |
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Re: What if............
(User Rating: 1 ) by moon_light on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:40:16 PM AEST (User
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oh how buttyfull if i was the girl you wrote this for i would say yess its one of thoughts pomes that grab at your emoshon.. great wright
lady moonlite |
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Re: What if............
(User Rating: 1 ) by moon_light on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:41:36 PM AEST (User
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oh how buttyfull if i was the girl you wrote this for i would say yess its one of thoughts pomes that grab at your emoshon.. great wright
lady moonlite |
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Re: What if............
(User Rating: 1 ) by moon_light on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:41:36 PM AEST (User
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oh how buttyfull if i was the girl you wrote this for i would say yess its one of thoughts pomes that grab at your emoshon.. great wright
lady moonlite |
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