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The Gilded Cage
Contributed by
jaycee
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 09:54:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the sun cleaves the veil
of cotton so white
my heart lov'ngly pierced
by gold'n ray so brite
my free will dries up
my soul totally hers
imagining freedom
gives me the shivers
this cage is so gilded
it is my new home
she eases my pains
i'm never alone
cage metal expands
into a portcul-lis
safe behind solid stone
we enjoy our first kiss
a portcullis
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-07-15 09:54:07]
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Re: The Gilded Cage
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 08:19:29 PM AEST
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Jaycee,
I love this poem. It is just perfect and you have melted my heart, and broken down my walls, I think you are amazing !!!!!!!
Love Leia36 |
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Re: The Gilded Cage
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:37:50 PM AEST
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OMG that is such an amazing poem. gosh u have not lost ur touch at all... if nething u got better. just... wow *breathless*
amazing poem! i wanna read it again *scrolls back up to top*...
jennie |
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