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in a verse
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:35:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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One set,
apon pairs of flickering eyes
but how many fires
are washed tonight?
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feathercut
... [
2005-07-15 00:35:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: in a verse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Benny14 on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:01:32 AM AEST (User
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i think its a nice start to a poem, even good enough to stand alone...so many different meanings can be derived, i like that a lot |
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Re: in a verse
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:43:12 AM AEST (User
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Don't know where I've been to miss your awesome writing but I'm here now.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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