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Never been so alone
Contributed by
spazz911
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:38:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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emptiness silent and sweet
empty words echoing at my empty feet
silent screams from a pressured soul
bouncing off the four walls i know
hitting deaf ears, my worries and woes
so i stand here alone, in a filled crowd
drifting as i stand there screaming out loud
wholeness be damned the world is my hell
sit here alone and falling from keeps
shifting in darkness, where no one else reaps
hollowed eyes staring back at me
when i look in the mirror i see wat i need
i sit here and cry when i see what you've done
and i can't believe in this war, you have won
stuck outside in the pouring rain
and never again will see what i've done
cause im searching for an anyomenous deep
fighting for secrets i will never keep
and im losing my mind in a mysterious sleep
nothing is right in my continueous reaps
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spazz911
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2005-07-14 23:38:39]
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Re: Never been so alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wannabe on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:45:58 PM AEST
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Re: Never been so alone
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by trini on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:37:18 AM AEST
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very good. i give you a 4
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