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To the Impossible
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:47:58 PM in AEST
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Will you carefully close your eyes
And drift off into sleep
Let your dreams take you away
A state of hopeless deep
Can you slowly fade away
Forget the memories you’ve made
Submit to the impossibility…
Just relax your loneliness profound
Just a smudge left on your life
Take the still frames imprinted there
The scars fade from the knife
And just let yourself fade away
Forgetting tomorrow and today
Give yourself to the impossible…
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blue_angel
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2005-07-14 22:47:58]
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Re: To the Impossible
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by Wannabe on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:52:53 PM AEST
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| I like this type of poetry, that which does not conform strictly. I don't know exactly that I'd like to go where you are taking me, "A state of hopeless deep", but I do like the way it is written. |
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Re: To the Impossible
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by Buggsy on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:28:03 PM AEST
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I may not be interpreting your poem in the way that you intended but... this "state of hopeless deep", to me resembles the depth of the mind. To me the words are talking about the fact that it is impossible to forget everything you expirience and that your life is what you make it and it will always be your life, no matter how hard you try and forget it.
I liked the poem very much, great writing. |
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