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Nazareth
Contributed by
punkhead13
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:05:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Growing up we never knew our lives would be so numb
My mother always told me the Nazareth would come
Sitting in the pail room waiting for the light
Calling out the name of my savior every night
Wishing he would see me and come to rescue me
But shadows in the night time is all I’d ever see
Staring at the darkness seeing eyes so cold
My mother never helped me neither will her soul
A punishment will come they’ll get all they have sought
I call for you come down to me and prove what I was taught……
Common spirits rising, Blood stained we will live
Call upon thy name, Thy truth is Nazareth
Hoping he will help, Set free the sins we hold
Let me see the truth, So I can believe what I was told……
Hold on to the handle firmly grasping tight
Take a second look into the blessed light
Common people stand alone the mountain man had made
The place where they had called him down they consistently had prayed
The darkness has overtaken me this death I’ll never mourn
Sitting in this empty room to evil I am sworn
Rescue me if it’s at all possible I don’t know where to go
They told me I would never leave but now I truelly know
So come to me and hold my hand and lead me through the storm
Or Nazareth I pray to you and wish for evermore……
Common spirits rising, Blood stained we will live
Call upon thy name, Thy truth is Nazareth
Hoping he will help, Set free the sins we hold
Let me see the truth, So I can believe what I was told……
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Re: Nazareth
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by Wannabe on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:31:44 PM AEST
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| I loved the poem. As for Nazareth I am about as unfamiliar with the name as I am with any name from any faith. It sounds as though your friend refers to the Christ I know. At any rate I can appreciate the feelings your friend so eloquently transveyed through word. |
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Re: Nazareth
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:42:44 PM AEST
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| i loved this. even though i dont practice your religion i think the sense of hope is powerfully brought out here and the imagery is great. great write. |
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Re: Nazareth
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:48:55 PM AEST
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Very good, powerfull, moving write.
U must be speaking of Jesus of Nazereth. I mean your friend.
Your friend should write more.
huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Nazareth
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:42:05 PM AEST
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| great poem.. I really like your work...jh |
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