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Missing you everyday
Contributed by
xGothic_Suicidex
on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I saw you the day before you shot yourself, you looked so gloomy and depressed i knew something was probably up because you never looked that way around me, but then i saw the gun in your backpack and never said anything to anyone , the next day i went to school and i walked across the parking lot next thing i know your laying on the street with blood coming from you head everyone runs and screams i blamed myself for what you have done you would've still been here if i would of said something i think of many times of ending it just so i can be there with you i still think of ways to end it but i stop every now and then to try and stay strong and handle it thry you are supposed to handle it thats why i am here till this day holding on making sure i stay true to you.
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Re: Missing you everyday
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:57:25 PM AEST (User
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wow, you definetly pull in the reader with that first sentence. im so sorry for whta happened but glad that you learned something through this, through him(or her),
its tough and i wish you the best. very captivating write. |
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Re: Missing you everyday
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:15:47 AM AEST (User
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A most compelling poem 2 say the least sorry 4 your pain yes please hang tough very gracious poem as always . . .
Ben |
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