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Haunted Plains
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:43:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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My roots stretch far here
in this darkened soil
too many yesterdays it seems
never enough tomorrows
people once worked and slaved
these fields
their dusty souls still remain
white shadowed shells
traipsing across the furrows
whispers in the wind
always the same
once again
taking claim
ghostly shadows
out on the plains
Laura Horner
7-14-05
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 08:05:05 PM AEST
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Nice bit of nostalgia here...I like this part a lot;
"Too many yesterdays it seems, never enough tomorrows..." Nicely done.
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 08:37:24 PM AEST
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Excellent piece of poetry. Those spirits are heard in the wind and will walk the plains forever.
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 08:53:23 PM AEST
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awsome write.
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:47:04 AM AEST
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whew! i could feel the breezes my sister
laura so freeing of the soul, and visual,
your poetry is lovely as ever . . .
peace 2u my sister laura . . .
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
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| great rhyming and good flow |
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Re: Haunted Plains
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by Spike on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:07:42 AM AEST
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I liked this one too. As much a personal reflection as a comment on place and history. traces of the numinous.
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