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You with her
Contributed by
breny
on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 04:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There's a hole in my heart
where you used to be
to this day I am tortured
will I ever be free?
Nina seems great
she's a beautiful girl
but something's wrong with this picture,
I used to be her!
Zacks a nice guy
and his feelings are strong
but my life with out you
just seems plain old wrong
We still talk once a week
and I'm glad we're still friends
but that just makes it harder
for my feelings to end
We are meant to be together
this I know for sure
but for the time being
I have to watch you fall for her
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-07-14 16:03:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You with her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:20:46 AM AEST (User
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This has t be the best yet sadest poem i read 2 day i mean it is as vunerable as an
infant in a dumbster, so mush pain u r going through, and yet able to express it so well, u r one coragieous girl, wish u well my friend
nice 2 see u back writting brenny . . .
(((((((breny))))))))
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Re: You with her
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:46:35 AM AEST (User
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This was such a great ending! Really something that I enjoyed a lot in this write. It's one of your best no doubt, and it was a strong way to end the poem. I hope things end up best in the long run for all of you. This love...square...seems frustrating, but I'm sure you'll be able to pull through. Here's hoping! Great write : ) |
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