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Don't Trust Me
Contributed by
justme03
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:54:49 PM in AEST
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lies
deception
dishonesty
hypocrisy
“no, don’t trust me”
Is there ever trust?
no
this world is a lie
Is there ever honesty?
no
this world is a joke
even when the truth is told
it is a half lie
a truth is what it is made to be
words go with meanings
trust has no true meaning
just like every other word
it is what you make it to be.
not perfect. . .
well, nothing is
don’t trust me
~Kortnie~
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Re: Don't Trust Me
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by wilma on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 04:32:14 PM AEST
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dear kortnie,
this poem is brilliat!!!
it doesnt even compare to mine (outcast) btw theis is will speakin
the first 3 word lines really create tension.
it is really thought provok9ing and it is obvious that this could only come from amazing poet
from will.
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Re: Don't Trust Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 06:10:26 AM AEST
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| I am astonished at your talent..... speechless! |
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Re: Don't Trust Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:10:30 PM AEST
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| great poem. my name is aubrey. |
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