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Victory
Contributed by
vox
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Victory is never known
to those who never try.
And they sit still and stay alone.
Their dreams will never rise.
I, although have never seen
this word called victory.
Onto the floor, upon my knees
Will never truly be.
I shall scrape my skin and bones
I’ll walk on with belief.
My road is set, a path of thorns,
Stop not, till I succeed.
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Re: Victory
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:19:28 PM AEST (User
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Well I think you succeeded quite nicely with this write! I thought it was a little vague, but I think that's part of the charm behind this piece. You are indeed expressing a very good point in this poem. Nice write.
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