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Once Upon A Memory
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:26:37 PM in AEST
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Oh, I remember the memories
under the sweet sun of Tuscany
through the cobbled streets of Paris
during that springtime reverie
as we explored all the echoes
the bright lights of Monte Carlo
wetting our feet in tepid shallows
on sandy beaches of Riviera narrows
the breeze that blew your hair askew
those raven tresses that loveliness drew
and those kisses from lips of thine
tasted as the sweetest Bourdeux wine.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-07-14 14:26:37]
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Re: Once Upon A Memory
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:51:05 PM AEST
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Lovely imagery, well-penned. Seems an abrupt ending fits perfectly with an abrupt loss.
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Re: Once Upon A Memory
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by trini on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:09:36 PM AEST
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not bad, a little short for my taste you left me wanting more, but still...it was good.
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Re: Once Upon A Memory
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Oh the journeys you take your readers on Baronhawk. This was so gentle, so kind, such lovely memories, that will last you until the end of time!
I thank you for the romantic trip!
Warm love
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