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Ghost
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Celestial delusions of a distant memory,
Tender pallid kisses from the cerulean Goddess,
La Luna...
So many moments by moonlight,
Evoking intangible longings,
Thoughts of touching you, of embracing your incorporeal body...
Death, blind and aimless, caressed you,
With his cold dagger fingers rather than the warmth of my own,
Lovingly ridding you of your life which you held so dear...
Forgotten words whispered softly in melancholic dreams,
Your presence haunting every fragment of my life,
The poetry of your gaze stealing my breath,
Killing me sweetly, my lungs crying for air,
My heart thrashing against these crumbling walls
A fading reminder of my existence...
Your vapor kisses bringing me back,
The icy divinity of your lips brushing against mine
Epiphanies of a love that once was...
A ghost of a smile adorning the corners of my mouth,
As I gaze with bittersweet tears descending,
At the photograph of you and I,
Immortal and glorious behind a crystal fortification,
Within a world where love never dies...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-07-14 13:15:38]
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Re: Ghost
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 03:07:38 PM AEST
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I know this world as well as the real one I live in. My love is with me everyday, in pictures, in memories, in spirit. Beautifully written in a soft gentle way that reminds us that our loved ones are still with us always and always shall be.
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Re: Ghost
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:11:44 PM AEST
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Beautifully sad nostalgia and longing present in this write. I really like the way you expressed yourself, and the style with which you wrote this was fitting. The ending is just perfect! Great job.
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Re: Ghost
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:29:01 PM AEST
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"The poetry of your gaze" YES I loved that, a
truly touching poem Steph... a beautiful poem
written by a beautiful girl. I loved it all and the
emotion in this write was heartbreaking. Glad
to hear that the hurricane didn't effect you and
I hope to catch you online soon. Keep up the
amazing writing my friend.
Peace,
Joel |
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Re: Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:51:52 AM AEST
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So much told in a simple way about emotions that run so deep, u the emperess of detail and such intricate writting yet never does it clutter or take away from the core of
the meaning of the word, hurting, a masterpeice of genuine self expression . . .
((((((stephy))))))) Ben |
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