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A Torn Heart
Contributed by
James_McMorn
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silent whispers through the night, they carry a thousand words,
A tear drop rolls like thunder amidst the cheek of my defenseless lover.
My soul vibrates with terror, I ponder what lay ahead of me,
A deep sleep?, a world of dreams?, or perhaps a love better lost.
The nights filled with passion echo anger through my windows of truth,
Yet defenseless and un-armed, I know nothing of which has decieved me.
Each movement closer, I shudder, I ache,
The thought of crying slithers its way through my mind once more.
She stares into my eyes, I see her fear and cold blooded sweat,
Clueless she grasps my hand and proceeds to show a negative person.
Is it severe schizophrenia? Jekyll and Hyde playing a modern role?,
One has only to think that what the future holds would scare even the most furious of demon.
The fire that was once burning, slowly distinguished,
why? deceit is all to blame, I was to caught up to see truth...failure.
The sea I sailed of a thousand hearts, smashed and broke to fragments,
All that is left is debris of a shattered heart.
So blind to see it coming, foolish to put faith in one's heart,
And now all thats left is a crying boy, who slowly crumbled apart.
I know she's laughing, the dank smirk on her face,
I can taste her bitterness, so sour.
I trusted to soon, i paid the price,
Now all's left is a torn heart.
Copyright ©
James_McMorn
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2003-01-10 06:20:00]
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 07:45:31 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful James... very deep and touching... l look forward to reading more of you |
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 08:44:47 AM AEST
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| very touching, thanks for sharing |
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:01:02 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, James..If this is any indication of what your poems are like..then I look forward to reading more from you... This was a wonderfully expressive write..with great imagery!!!
Jenni |
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:30:29 AM AEST
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Wow... I honestly dont know what to say about this poem. It was very well written. I don't know how young you are I am 16 nearly 17 and have never felt pain as u so vividly described. Wow I'll look forward to more from you.
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by FireStorm12 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:33:47 AM AEST
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| I too have recently had my heart riped out, and stomped on...my wife left me for a woman...talking about an ego blow. Very Very Very nice work...I loved it. I am sorry for your pain...just keep on trying one day love will find you! I am still looking for mine, I thought I had found her...but oh well...the search continues! Good work |
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Re: A Torn Heart
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 12:16:09 PM AEST
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| James, you have a real talent, and gets great to see you using this talent at such a young age...keep it up. Jeff |
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