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I'm Not Coming Back

Contributed by babytearschick on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:39:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Everything’s right
And nothings wrong
When I look at your face
And I’m in your arms

Later that night
I look up at the stars
And wonder which one
Could be ours

Than something happened
And I didn’t know what to do
You said you loved me
And there’s nothing to lose

But for some odd reason
I didn’t believe you
And when you looked in my eyes
It wasn’t really you

Later that night
I got a call
You said you got stoned
Down at the mall

You told me your sorry
And you won’t do it again
Yet I know the stories
And you will do it again

So now I gotta let you go
Now matter how much I don’t want to
I know it’s for the best
And that I have to

So now I say goodbye
And I look in your eyes
And I see what has fallen
It’s the stars in the sky

Stars are falling
In the sky
Faster and faster they fall
As I fade away into where I lay

I’m gone for good
And there’s no coming back
No matter how much you beg
I’m not coming back




Copyright © babytearschick ... [ 2005-07-13 23:39:31]
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Re: I'm Not Coming Back (User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:44:27 AM AEST
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I liked your poem It was well writen. I hope you keep writing And would like to hear more
ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL


Re: I'm Not Coming Back (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:44:25 AM AEST
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Aw i can relate to your sadness.

The emotion was very real in this poem, and I also fell in love with a stoner, and yeah it wasnt pretty. So i can really understand your pain and how much it does hurt to say goodbye and walk away.

Well done, thank you for sharing.

Hope to you dear poet.




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