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Way Out Life
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 10:21:28 PM in AEST
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A night on the town and all is unwound
To be with thee, is such a glee
To look and know
All can be a flow
To go and be as free as the wind
The looks that have been given
Are already written
To hold the hand
Who has you smitten
To have what you have known all along
And will soon be told ....................you win!!!!!!
Wouldnt it be the happiest time.....if time could be
Where all could wonder , frolic and be free
Just being "out there" tonite..........open and ready for life......
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Re: Way Out Life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:40:08 AM AEST
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Good work, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by poisonpen00ad on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:08:25 AM AEST
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| Good stuff. |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 08:02:46 PM AEST
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The closing line in this poem is outstanding. Makes the whole poem whole!!!
Just being "out there" tonight open and ready for life.
So many are not open and so many more are not open and ready for life!
I'm so glad you are brew!
And thank you so much for all your lovely comments
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by bernard on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:39:56 AM AEST
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| Brew first of all let me thank you for all of your great comments on my little stories. I have often in my long life had those moments that you so well describe. Out there, tonight. I wish that all the readers and contributers of Y.P.D.C have those moments it is really the spice of life. Thanks again brew from bernard. |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:26:55 PM AEST
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What a great rhyming scheme..
There's someting about this write
I love..I can't put my finger on it..
but theres something wonderful here..
An excellent post my friend..
Billy |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:59:00 PM AEST
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why so few the be free write the words of few
or to understand why so new
we aint the few
we share the words of true blue wisdom
and we shall be free
for you |
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Re: Way Out Life
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:04:24 PM AEST
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| Great flow within this poem.One can sense that you almost "felt that freedom",or "live the poem" whist writing it.Spontaneous.I enjoyed reading it! |
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