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i told you so!
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you look at me
you see my scars
you see the blood
flow down my arm
but you dont care
you continue to yell
as im slowly burinin
in my personal hell
not even so much
as a hug from you
no "im sorry, i do care"
or an "i love you"
well what should i think
when im drownin in my blood
and you wont even lend a hand
to help me get up
youre the one whos sposed to be there
no matter what
youre my mother goddamn it
do your *****in job
you pretend to know what im thinkin
how i feel inside my heart
but youre so *****in blind you cant even see
thats its ben completly torn apart
if you knew me at all
then youd know what i need
is for you shut up an listen
or get out an leave
but no! you keep pushin
an im about to fall off...
of this cliff that youve put me on
please just step the ***** off
you continue to tease me
continue to taunt
while im beginin to think
this must be what you want
so if you want me dead...
then please let me know....
cause ill do it, i swear...
even if just to be able to say
i told u so
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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bethers_is_my_baby
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2005-07-13 20:38:08]
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Re: i told you so!
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by poisonpen00ad on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:16:14 PM AEST
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| Powerful and moving. Great work. |
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Re: i told you so!
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:24:39 AM AEST
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