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Broken
Contributed by
night_goddess666
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:43:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Bright, piercing green eyes.
Full of lost hope and sorrow.
Tears toll down his face.
Copyright ©
night_goddess666
... [
2005-07-13 16:43:02]
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Re: Broken
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:06:22 PM AEST
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It is a nice haiku. Did you possibly mean "tears ROLL down his face"?
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Re: Broken
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by night_goddess666 on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:34:31 PM AEST
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| For anyone who reads this poem. I did mean to write tears ROLL down his face. I'm really bad at typing and I didn't catch that mistake when I submited the poem. |
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Re: Broken
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 10:39:41 PM AEST
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i knew what you ment good write simple but good
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