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kindness.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:30:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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When you show kindness there is less hateless.
Kindness is the key to goodness.
Kindness is the key to less hopeless.
When there is kindness ,,, there is less deathless.
SOshow your basic kindness today.
SO someone will know the kindness in your heart.
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Re: kindness.
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:40:55 PM AEST
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I DIDNT MEAN FOR THIS POEM TO BE
ON HERE 3 TIMES BUT ANYWAYS PLZ COMMENT ME ON MY POEMS. WHEN YOU READ PLZ COMMENT ME.. I KNOW I AM
NOT THAT GOOD .. BUT LEAVE ME
COMMENT ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^
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Re: kindness.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:03:03 PM AEST
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its a good poem keep writing
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Re: kindness.
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:15:09 PM AEST
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Well, the hateless and deathless have to go because they are not words, lol. But the feelings and thoughts behind the work are excellent. This has good feeling in it and I enjoyed reading it. Just don't make up words, lol. Keep writing. You do have talent.
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Re: kindness.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:26:55 AM AEST
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| Great Poem, just make sure to read over it for mistakes, but other than that great write, and the moral behind it was good. If u can comment on some of my poems:)thanks |
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