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He Did It Too
Contributed by
ninnyfarfar
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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She said I’m sorry
And begged him to stay
Tears ran down her face
And he walked away
He always did the wrong
He always did the lying
She always took the worst
She always did the crying
Somehow things changed
She did the wrong
He said he couldn’t stay
That they didn’t belong
Her worst fear
Has now come to life
He wants a divorce
She’s no longer his wife
Of all the stupid things
She had to be untrue
His one secret though
Was he did it too
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2005-07-13 13:22:18]
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Re: He Did It Too
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 02:14:21 PM AEST
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| Good Write, you really used your poem to tell the story well, Im sorry about your parents, mine broke up when I was 11...if you find time could u please comment on You Saved Me, or maybe some of my other poems? it would really mean a lot to me. Great write, keep up the good work! |
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Re: He Did It Too
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:03:37 PM AEST
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Sad poem but u told the story well!
i know how u feel.. i never knew my dad
he left me when i was little so i never
knew him and i didnt have a dad,
im sorry about your parents getting a divorce..
if u could plz comment me on my poems sometimes if would be nice.
hugs butterflygirl40^_^ |
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Re: He Did It Too
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by RoxyGirl on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:30:12 AM AEST
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I really like your write it good and i hope to read more
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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