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sorry for being alive
Contributed by
hopefades
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:48:57 AM in AEST
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she is sitting in the corner
waiting for her life to pass her by
but it takes so long
because she has been waiting for this for her whole life
she doesnt want to live
she puts her hands upon a knife
thinking to herself
should i or not
shakeing out of her skin
hearing herself breathe
harder and harder
no one understood her
she never knew someone who did
her eyes set on the kinfe
she was sure
she placed the knife upon her chest
turning cold by the second
she said with her last breath
sorry for being alive
she closed her eyes
and went to sleep
a deep sleep
never to have to face the world again
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Re: sorry for being alive
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:51:27 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem. and i can relate. great job. peace. jena |
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Re: sorry for being alive
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 09:48:30 AM AEST
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I personally didn't like this because this was an ending line for one of my poems and it kind of took away the meaning in mine. That's just my little insecurities though, this was a great poem and well written.
Keep it up,
.amanda. |
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Re: sorry for being alive
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by rhyrhy on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:15:28 PM AEST
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hey sexy! i love the poem! it was fabulous! haha shawn's partay was fun! haha shawn freakin with me. hahahahahaahahah! good times good times! I freakin love you!
rhyan aka: Ferd
lets hang out soon! cuz i already miss you even though i just got back home from spending a weekend with you! |
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Re: sorry for being alive
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:37:03 AM AEST
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| aww sad....ive felt like that soo many times ....its not fun....i really loved this poem though...awesome job! |
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Re: sorry for being alive
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:27:36 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how that feels. Many times I have felt that way and wanted to do exactly that. Good write |
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