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Same Old Story
Contributed by
billy_corgan
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:26:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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flames, water, a cliche
smoke - speaking riddles to a fine summer day
thoughtlessly, fecklessly, fighting the heat
lest a spark ignite stalk-like feet
religious prayer perhaps
possible dare perhaps
silence one two three
miracle (there was not to be)
fishing, razor cutters; long-hooked hooks?
tremble of a treble, the ground shook
two spires of fire into the sky
determined to live determined to die
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billy_corgan
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2005-07-13 00:26:33]
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Re: Same Old Story
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:30:21 AM AEST
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enjoyable read very interesting kept me reading start to finish
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Re: Same Old Story
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by SinginSilence on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:38:51 AM AEST
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| uh yeah definitly abstract poetry i uh....what? |
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Re: Same Old Story
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:08:43 PM AEST
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| I have read this piece several times and find it very thought provoking. The first stanza is awesome. Well done. Peace to you. Laura |
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