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No longer under your power
Contributed by
mystical_illusion
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Just as a momment passes that you didn't cross the back of my mind,
A ice cold bolt of fear streams through my spine.
I turn to find your cutting eyes upon me,
Abruptly my world spins, and am unable to hear anything but my head grind.
Suddenly the scars and the burns swell and rip,
Black, thick blood runs out,
Veins uncontrollably pumping out photographic memories from hell.
The shattered pieces of my heart flop and flip.
Surrounding begin to melt, then merely disappear.
Time swims in a sea of enternity, seconds pass but seasons have changed.
I stand open, alone, and freezing in the winter night.
Barred deep within a solid prison of fear.
I turn to run but I'm knee high in sinking sand
Difficult to breath as my anger and pain loads on my chest.
The grains of broken heart glog my pipes
And a power from an unknown source bursts and I can now regain my stand.
I use all my strength and energy pulling my-self from your strong trance.
No longer am I a helpless child so easily over powered.
No longer will you keep me down, your tight clasp has lost its hold
Never again will you commit your soul-destroying dance.
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2003-01-10 02:20:00]
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Re: No longer under your power
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by LJ on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 02:57:38 AM AEST
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It is roughly written, but it is a powerful emotional piece.
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Re: No longer under your power
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:23:58 AM AEST
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Wow I liked this a lot. It was powerfully written. 'The grains of broken heart glog my pipes' that line really stood out to me. I liked this and am glad u wrote this to help with the pain. I find writing poetry can be helpful. Keep on fighting.
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Re: No longer under your power
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 05:00:36 PM AEST
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No wonder you began to feel better after that.
Powerful stuff |
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Re: No longer under your power
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 06:00:01 PM AEST
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| oooooooh, i looove this one. its full of anger, i likes! nice one! |
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