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Uniqueness
Contributed by
kitty_express2001
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:07:40 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Uniqueness is when you are you and you only
Noone can be like you but u can be yourself
I think being your self is the way to be
fay away as you go through the years trying to be someone else
decay away as you wonder through life trying to be something you are not
but the best uniqueness i like is myself
written by kitty_express2001
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Re: Uniqueness
(User Rating: 1 ) by burnthefire on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST (User
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cliche...in my opinion. anyone could have written this by just listening to or reading other poetry. it lacks originality and emotion. |
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Re: Uniqueness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:18:56 AM AEST (User
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this one's decent, The arrival at the end is very good, but getting there was a bit muddy. You've got great ideas, that i can see, but you need to work on it some.
I know, I'm the guy who writes all the stupid poems so you probobly don't want my help, but it's true, witha bit of practice, you'll make a great poet! |
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Re: Uniqueness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:38:28 AM AEST (User
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I'm not sure about this is english even your first language, the poem doesn't make much sense to me sorry :-( |
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