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Keep watching as I fall
Contributed by
strwbrrystrbrst0225
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 08:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Do you see me standing here,
can you hear me scream.
Forgetting all, living in this broken dream.
Why don't you hold me when I cry,
Instead you just watch, and you will keep on watching,
watching as I die.
Can you see my body all broken and used,
Covered all over
all bloody and bruised
Why do you hold me up, why can't you just let go?
I'm losing all I have, i'm lost in all this pain,
So do you see me standing ,
keep watching as I fall
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Re: Keep watching as I fall
(User Rating: 1 ) by kitty_express2001 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:22:03 PM AEST (User
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I loved this poem....strong write!! keep writing! |
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