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21 Questions
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:03:14 PM in AEST
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Ever peer into your soul and find nothing?
Arrive at the table with zero to bring?
Set your sights on something you could not see?
Clutch onto something only to set it free?
Take a stab at peace and feel ill at ease?
Ponder a possibility, but never seize?
Lie to yourself because it's the easiest route to take?
Live in a dream when you're wide awake?
Question yourself, wonder when things got out of hand?
Tried to ask for something politely, but out comes a demand?
Searched someones eyes for meaning, only to find a void?
Attempt to make a persons day, only to make them annoyed?
Stared out your window and wished yourself away?
Told someone to leave when you really want them to stay?
Thought back---disgusted---over something you said?
Longed to hear words that you actually dread?
Waited for a phone call that you'll never receive?
Fell in love with an idea that you don't even believe?
Think you're sure of who you are, only to discover you're not?
Desperate to get your point across, but get lost in thought?
(Hmmm...let's see, is there anything I forgot?)
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Re: 21 Questions
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by zenaprincess on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:15:32 PM AEST
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ummmmm - yes to all!
This was really thought provoking and well written. |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:30:37 PM AEST
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can i see the answer key to this?
when i read the first lines to be honest i started rolling my eyes thinking "great another question poem" because i think sometimes people get carried away with putting rhetorical questions into their works. You did a good job with this and by the time i got down to the last questions you actually had me dwelling on a number of these. i dont know what your intended effect on the reader was if any, but i think this is a really cool poem. |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:58:32 PM AEST
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amazing work!! it totally brought memories of everything i did and didn't do... i clap and clap my applause to you!
thanks for the awesome write
dw |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:59:08 PM AEST
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I honestly thought this poem, perfect. Yep.
And a big YESSSSSSS to all the questions.
This could be an unending poem or a set to many!
It's really good scorp.
Kie :) |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Arden on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:45:17 PM AEST
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interesting poem. i think with the question format that you used, that 21 questions was a little to much. i really enjoyed it when i first started, i thought it was creative and refreshing. but then it just droned on and on.
4/5
nice work though :)
-Rebekah |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:56:06 PM AEST
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| i loved this ! its so unique, thought-provoking and allows many to relate. very well written! |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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| scorp. i think this one of my favs by you, your so right in your face here, really capturing the eyes and takingthem for a ride down the page...awesome job as always..your a genius |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by CarolinaBlue on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:37:31 PM AEST
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Scorp, I thought this was extroadinary!
You get so sucked in by all the
questions that you almost have
to remind yourself to keep reading
instead of trying to answer them
or recall instances in your life
where these events actually took place.
Bravo! Two thumbs up.
~Blue~ |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:17:16 PM AEST
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wow this sounds like you've had one of those day scorp, lol very effective in raising the stress level great poem . . .
Ben |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:35:34 PM AEST
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thought provoking write scorp.
what else can i say but...YES!
wiz |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:49:05 AM AEST
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| WOW Scorp you are so friggen good man, I love your writes. This is just so right the freak on. It made me all teary eyed, so many of those questions, I know I've asked myself. This was just a brilliant piece. I am such a fan. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:39:54 AM AEST
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Brilliant!!!! I can relate to all these questions with a big YES! You have created another masterpiece, scorp.
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:33:47 PM AEST
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| Hey that was great. Sounds like you had a bad day! I love how it is somewhat contradicting. Some of those apply. I think a lot of them apply to different people, everyone can relate in a way. Very creative style. I really enjoyed that Scorp. |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by boobiepeach on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:36:17 PM AEST
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Live in a dream when you're wide awake?
i love that. and dont we all.
great and creative poem.
peach |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 05:57:12 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking piece of poetry u have here Scorp. A true masterpiece written with such depth and expression. A truly talented poetess whose talent shines through her brillant work. You go girl.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:33:15 PM AEST
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| I didn't find this too long, too many questions, too 'done before'. it's thought provoking and makes u look inwards... i really liked it - just as it is. thanks for sharing it :) |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:32:39 AM AEST
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| Yes...oops, sorry. I was answering the questions :) Scorp, this is truly awesome. Ingenious and thought provoking. Oh...and wow! |
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Re: 21 Questions
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 11:08:38 AM AEST
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Once again I find myself wanting to answer the questions.
And, yes, you forgot the other twenty questions!!! :P
I enjoyed this and then I'll have to PM you another thought.
Thankies,
Me too. |
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