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i wish you werent you
Contributed by
je2ica3
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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if i asked you to stay and pray with me i know youd say no.
but if i asked you to stop and look at me youd look straight forward.
i know you love me well thats what i wanna think
i make up things too tell people about how great you are and how loving and caring you cane be
but i just wish that my one wish would come true
i wish you werent you
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Re: i wish you werent you
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:05:00 PM AEST
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Other than spelling errors I thought this poem made a strong statement.
If you have to make up greatness and hide all the unseemly---something is obviously wrong, very wrong.
I also liked the title.
Keep writing.
Kie |
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Re: i wish you werent you
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 08:23:45 PM AEST
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i really liked this one.
i really couldn't relate to it, but as u describe it, i could see how someone would wish that.
~ALD~ |
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Re: i wish you werent you
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by LovelChelsea on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:50:20 PM AEST
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| Hmm, kinda made me wanna know the person you are talking about. I'm sorta in the same position I guess you could say.?. |
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