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Indifference
Contributed by
LabWolf
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:26:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Only in perfect pain can I find peace.
Only when all is lost does the longing cease.
Seems I win this time around;
I like the indifference I have found.
I accept nothing, it's my identity.
I rest in my minds chaotic sea -
And dream of things that I have lost,
Moments of peace, but at such a cost.
Only in perfect fear can I be brave.
I live only when I'm close to the grave.
When all is well depression creeps in,
Urging me back to the edge again.
Where I go no longer matters to me.
Wherever it is, there I'll be.
If I escape this prison in my mind -
What horrid beauty would I find...
Freedom will never touch this soul;
I will never reach my goal -
Of peace, faith, serenity,
For only in darkness can I see.
Only in perfect pain can I find peace;
Only amidst chaos does this madness cease.
Seems I win this time around -
I love the indifference I have found.
© Barry Wayne Veinotte
Copyright ©
LabWolf
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2005-07-12 14:26:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Indifference
(User Rating: 1 ) by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:41:49 PM AEST (User
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This is a well written poem, good job. It reminds me of a song by the band mewithoutYou which goes "the cure for pain is in the pain/ so it's there that you'll find me..." that's a great song, and this is a good composition. God bless. |
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Re: Indifference
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 03:15:26 PM AEST (User
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I know how you feel. I often feel indifferent to my life as well. Your indifference is indicated very well here. Great poem! |
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Re: Indifference
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 06:12:09 PM AEST (User
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good flow I can almost feel the struggle within to love to be loved to no avail living life within ones hell. |
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