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Candles
Contributed by
charmed_socks
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Candles draw flame
As clocks lose hours
We dance with the fireflies
Between moonlit flowers.
Candles draw flame
As homes turn bright
Fighting through knowing
Darkness always turns into light.
Candles draw flame
As hands cannot burn
Watching the orange glow
Until days’ return.
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charmed_socks
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2005-07-12 12:24:59]
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Re: Candles
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by Justintears on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:40:36 PM AEST
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| Oh my....! Completely breathtaking. Every line shines with perfection and beauty. Makes me feel like i'm crying in hope's arms. Well done. |
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Re: Candles
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by Drapes on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:49:32 PM AEST
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Interesting! So powerful! Nice write!
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