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******* Through
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
Because none of them are ******* true.
I'm sick of the lies you promise me,
The little games you play one me.
I won't handle this any longer,
I didn't want to hate you,
I wanted to stay your friend.
But I can't stand it, you're a liar.
This has got to be the way it ends.
So stay the **** away from me,
If you are going to play more games.
I'm going to be as tough as steel now,
I won't love so easily.
I won't long to feel your touch.
I'm moving on now,
Taking a stand.
You have said it once before:
I deserve a better man.
So I will take your advice,
I'm leaving you for good.
Don't come crawling back to me,
I've grown out of childhood.
I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
None of them were ******* true.
No more promises will I make to you,
So that's it John, we're ******* through.
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Re: ******* Through
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:13:38 PM AEST
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Excellent break-up poem! Very well put. Nice flow and rhyme. I hope this helps you to vent some of your anger and to move on. Peace.
Thumper ; o) |
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Re: ******* Through
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:20:38 AM AEST
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| very potent. =] i like angry poems. i felt your anger, and i loved the phrase "f*cking true" and "f*cking through" but dont tell anyone =] on one spot i think you can change the lines to not have me so close together and at the end of each of those lines. your ending was of course wonderful, very impressing. |
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Re: ******* Through
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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I EFFING LOVED IT! wow amanda! you did great on this one! can i use it when i break up with anyone i hate lol very nive rythm and rhyme i loved it my favorite stanza is "i'm sick of the feelings i have for you, none of them were f****** true" i loved it... LOVED IT!!! lol keep up the good work amanda
luv ur cuz
~karis~ |
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