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Your Eyes (part 2)....
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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For the last few years
I've had my eyes on you,
You have plenty of friends
but few people to talk to.
We're similar in many ways
and different in few,
We like the same stories
and the same music too.
I never look you directly in the eye (much)
and I usually don't talk,
I guess I'm the silent type
that likes to go on a walk.
I'd like to be with you
and take a walk on the beach,
At night, we could look at
all the stars we can "reach."
Whenever I look
into your eyes,
I have to look away
or I'll get hypnotized....
It's almost as if
your eyes cast a spell,
It only attracts me
and only me....oh well.
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2003-01-10 00:00:00]
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Re: Your Eyes (part 2)....
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by Kirby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:04:24 PM AEST
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| I don't know how people can read this and not comment on it! I really loved this poem and i will give it a five becasue it deserves it/ Great poem again. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Your Eyes (part 2)....
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:27:22 PM AEST
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Great poem!!I am so glad you can captivate things like that and you will be famouse for your poems one day........someway
Darlene |
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