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Sins
Contributed by
Belcha
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:10:32 AM in AEST
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Sins by Joe Belcher
Sins flow violently through the earth and beyond into hell
They eat at you terribly and make your head swell
So if you wanna go to heaven you must decide
Whether to go with a swell head or run and hide
Sins are remembered by the worst of guardians
Whose job is to punish the sinful ones
Next time you think of sinning
Remember the guardian and forget about winning
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Belcha
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2005-07-12 10:10:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sins
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:02:43 AM AEST (User
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Short, sweet and to the point! Well done!
Alot of my poems are based on the same topic. You hit the nail on the head!
Angel always...joni |
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