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GUT WRENCHING??????
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:39:51 AM in AEST
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When Life has you down
and worries to much for you to bare
Remember an
Angel is Always near
SultryRose's Signatures
Little man much we don't understand
Fate turns things around.
Your dad thinks he's right
To push your mom out of sight.
Oh God, got this gut wrenching
feeling in my soul.
So many out of control.
repeat
Mom wept with you in her
arms that day
but your dad got his way.
Illegal lawyers play his game too.
Eventually he took all rights to you.
Now I don't hate him
like he does your precious mom.
hate has no place in my heart.
Not even when he ripped you a part.
Momma and Dylon luv you true.
You have two step sisters too.
Fred your step dad cares
We all luv you beyond compare.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:19:02 AM AEST
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So very true Emystar. So many things there are we fail to understand. Cannot be expected to understand.
But one thing is sure, God has a plan and turns adversity into good and can soften hard hearts, and bring good out of evil.
The little man is in His tender arms.
Great poem Emystar!
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:33:37 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet, a very honest true write Emy.
I liked it.
Jane xxx |
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:10:22 AM AEST
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Oh Em...I am sure Ty knows how much he is loved..... really gut wrenching..
Hugs
Jenni |
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by brew on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:35:00 AM AEST
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Just not right.......sad..but write was beautiful. So sorry. maybe day he wil understand.
Brew~ |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:26:16 PM AEST
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God bless and bring peace and love to you all.
Rita |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful while sad emy but never the less well stated . . .
Ben |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:55:29 AM AEST
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Gut wrenching and heartstring yanking ... Emy. My heart goes out to you ...
Nazzy ~
( too speachless to say more ... though more is certainly well deserved ) |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:53:56 PM AEST
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Oh No!!!Sweet Emy! I'm so proud of you for holding your heart together and thinking of the child instead of you!So much injustice in court than justice it seems!!! The person with the most money usually wins out, or the illegal attorneys find a way!
Oh my........how my heart goes out to you all!
warm love
consuemom |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by venkat on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:44:58 AM AEST
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A precious write for the child.good dedication.
Welldone Emy.:-)venkat |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by bernard on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:32:03 AM AEST
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| Emy I myself and my lovely wife were not blessed with children. We also have this gut wrenching problem when we see children with their parents on the street or in a coffee shop. We both appreciate what you must be going through. That you have no hate in your heart is just wonderful We sometimes blame him above for our lack of children. we would have been good parents for we both have so much love to give. Bless you Emy with hugs from martha and bernard. |
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:44:34 AM AEST
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This pulled at my heart in so many ways.
Beautifully written.
*hugs*
Shannon |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:39:11 AM AEST
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Having been through it with my daughter..
I feel your pain!
I got her though-
it's been six wonderful years...and counting!
Me and her!
(kinda tough when I had to have "The Talk"
with her..
(lest the humiliation and humor of my friends..lol)
though their hearts meant well-)
Love and Hugs to You Emy..
Billy
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:13:23 PM AEST
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| As always you know how to weave a good story and poem together. |
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Re: GUT WRENCHING??????
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by robertdavidson on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 04:07:29 AM AEST
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Emystar,
A sad but heart-warming poem showing how love persists despite family crises. Your pain underscores your every word.
Robert Davidson. |
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