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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
rhyrhy
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:59:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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"All this anger I have is from you
and all the stupid things you do"
he says to me as I watch him scream
He make me feel like outcast, like I dont belong
But I care about him like never before
He's not all bad you see
He also cares about me.
He makes me feel like I have no worries in the world
But as soon as he leaves the room
I do all those stupid things I do
Its not that I'm not happy to be with him
Its just that I've got anger from within
I'm not happy with myself or the choices I make
I feel like I'm a big mistake
The pain goes away when I make that first cut
and I'll always remember the remarks that I got
"Oh my god did you see her arm? She must be a pyhco."
or "Oh man that girl is so stupid"
Yeah I know its stupid
but dont judge me for the pain that I got
I'm sorry I must have hurt you
with all the stupid things I do
I'll try to stop I promise
but i cant deal with this
the pain of you leaving me
I want you here with me
So I'm sorry once again for all the pain that I caused you
Goodbye and good night
I'll see you someday.
Copyright ©
rhyrhy
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2005-07-12 01:59:42]
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:46:48 PM AEST
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| Wow that was deep. Very sad, but well written. Althought I want you to know that there is always someone that cares for you whether you know it or not so please don't hurt yourself, it's only selfish and not worth it. Don't hurt people that love you. I lost a friend due to suicide, it asn't fair. We will also be hurt because we won't get to see your great writing anymore. I hope you feel better and great job! |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:46:24 AM AEST
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Oh rhyrhy how very sad. I want to welcome you to YPDC. and to thank you for the lovely comment you made on my poem. That's the way to get known is by commenting on others poems.
This write was very sad. If this is how he makes you feel, then he is no good for you!
Get as far from him as you can. It won't improve, it will only get worse, and please don't hurt yourself again!
Warm love
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:15:57 AM AEST
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| hmm rhyan its ayna....but anyways...i love youu soooo much and i miss u and by the way im always here for u even tho im 18937410834 millions miles away...im still here...hehehe i love u!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:15:58 AM AEST
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| hmm rhyan its ayna....but anyways...i love youu soooo much and i miss u and by the way im always here for u even tho im 18937410834 millions miles away...im still here...hehehe i love u!!!!!!!!!! |
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