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two friends
Contributed by
frannykilledzooey
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:12:21 AM in AEST
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if i tried to write a poem about my two friends that died
one by cancer, one by suicide
it seems it would come out like this
kind of *****ty
years later i can't even perfect
that moment, and that feeling
maybe i don't have any
or maybe it's too much drunk time
and maybe i should write about my kidneys aching, instead
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Re: two friends
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by happy_girl on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:15:11 AM AEST
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Re: two friends
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by RoxyGirl on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:38:12 AM AEST
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im so sorry for your lost. I know how you feel like nothing matters but keep your head high and never let it fall. Just hold on Gods with you.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
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