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pure love
Contributed by
happy_girl
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:04:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You’re all talking about your friends
And this subject will never end
So why don’t I talk about mine too?
His love is endless, pure and true
I have lots of friends though
No one’s like him as you know
He’s the one from above
Who sends to all his sweet love
He’s the one who I go to
When I feel sad and blue
He’s the one who always cares
He’s my friend, yours, even theirs
He takes away my fears
He’s who clears my tears
He loves all of us more than anyone
He wants us to know that he’s never gone
He’s like a father, We’re like his sons
He doesn’t like us to play with guns
He’s always here in times of need
Let’s make him happy by good deeds.
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2005-07-12 01:04:55]
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Re: pure love
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:12:31 AM AEST
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Re: pure love
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:26:40 AM AEST
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Amen!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: pure love
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by RoxyGirl on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:42:45 AM AEST
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Your poem is great because yes God is are father and we can always count on him to be there thick though thin no matter what.
God Bless You
ALWAYS LOVE YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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Re: pure love
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by marjanhr on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 04:12:40 AM AEST
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So Beautifully explained.Amen
well done! |
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Re: pure love
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by karoody on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 09:00:08 AM AEST
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| thank you! that's what faith is supposed to be! that's how HE really is. the hipocrasy and the way people say he hates sinners and we should fear him sickens me. poetry like yours, words like yours. that spreads faith. the other spreads hatred and war. our world has seen enough of that. we need more pure love like yours. beautiful! |
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