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Catnip
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're like catnip,
And I'm like the kitten.
You attract me with your aura,
And your beat of sensuality.
I'm chasing you like crazy,
But you never chase me back.
You're like catnip,
And I'm like the kitten.
You're better than all those other toys,
And you can attract me better than them, too.
I guess I can't really get you.
I don't think you see that my eyes are on you.
You're like catnip,
And I'm like the kitten.
You're hard to catch,
But easy to follow.
You're always there,
But I can never see you.
You're like catnip,
And I'm like the kitten.
I'm chasing you like crazy,
But you never chase me back
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Re: Catnip
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:40:04 AM AEST
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| I think the reoccuring simile is cute and creative. Ha, i never really pictured it like a cat and catnip but i suppose it does work well. |
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Re: Catnip
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 09:25:19 PM AEST
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Such a great simile! That's sooo true for me and I'm sure soo many people! Great write!
-Drapes |
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Re: Catnip
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by Depression-chan on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 03:54:22 AM AEST
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| Hmm... I liked the way each part of the poem started with the same line, I believe it was also the weakest part of the poem. Keep practicing! |
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