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So if I'm dying where are you?
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:01:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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And i'm so over that moment
i'm not reminiscing
not close to missing you
you promised you'd been blinded
been stupid and regretful
the saddest moment of your life
marked by my departure from your heart
the happiest marked by our hands together
our days and nights in submission to love
and if i were dying you said you'd say
you love me and you always have
from the day you first held me
first told me
first cherished
i believed the past would reconveine
when you fell from the face of the planet
and i couldn't follow
so the past came back to eat the present
and if i'm dying why won't you say
what you promised?
that you love me
because you lied
and i'm so over that moment
when you swore to me on everything precious
when you touched my hand and melted me
i'm over the shaking voice on the phone
the shaking hand in my pants
the stuttered love and forgiveness
i'm over it and i'm so over you
so if i'm dying where are you
where's my superhero
why did i wake up at all today
why did i uncover this planet
you're gone
and i'm so over it
**** you we're over
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Re: So if I'm dying where are you?
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by demonika_911 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:09:34 PM AEST
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Great poem, i can relate to this one, so i'll read it whenever I feel like going back to him!
Great work, keep it up
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Re: So if I'm dying where are you?
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by imagenuinefake on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:17:30 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, too. It's very easy to relate to. |
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Re: So if I'm dying where are you?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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| incredible, well done |
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Re: So if I'm dying where are you?
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by Grace_and_Glory on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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| reminds me of the book, You Remind me of You |
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