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Broken feelings.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I-feel-like-nothing.
…As I look around me.
This world is horrific.
Why can’t people see?
That pain-doesn’t-end.
But people ignore it!
People-pretend!
As if it’s all in the blend…
I have broken feelings.
But people say I’m doing great.
Why are they lying?
What have they to celebrate?
This-world-full-of-dying!
Fights and abuse.
But every one’s denying,
That pain has my youth…!
I-have-a-numb-feeling!
And I don’t sleep much at night.
Every thing’s reacting.
Shelling fears so deep inside.
Every one’s been rejecting me!
And now, others have open arms.
But no one seems to under-stand,
The pain every thing has caused.
I’m-numb-and-almost-chocking.
I’ve broken and snapped.
Suicide keeps me hoping,
One day death will slap.
But right now I’m open.
Lying still in emptiness.
But I don’t feel woken,
I just feel every painful impact…!
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Re: Broken feelings.
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by secretwind on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:02:44 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful
many of us lost souls wander
wondering
what's real......
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Re: Broken feelings.
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:22:05 AM AEST
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The peace must come from within you. |
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Re: Broken feelings.
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by harlot20 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:04:53 PM AEST
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| sometimes a human can only go through so much and come out ok and even stronger and not break. but even then we have to fight. |
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