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Surgeon’s General Warning
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:24:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hazardous to my own heath
I inhale and loosen my leather belt
Squander an accruing wealth
Then ponder life and death itself
Pretentious in the way I walk
The way my arms swing, how else, back and forth
When I beg the phone to ring
Standing there again, all by myself
Confidence in my rough voice
Tolerance in the tone of my tough choice
Can a bone be picked
An interest loan be fixed
A birth day switched
On which I will rejoice
Gamblers cards all along
Up the sleeve hides the trick
A ventriloquist
I never even heard his voice
This song goes nowhere
Its coarse chorus needs a drink
Fresh spring water from the tap
Straight from the tiled sink
American showgirls and whisky
Turning the boys to men in a blink
Danger discourages
One from exploring beyond their zone
Comfort from a prison cell
Still, will never be known as my home
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Re: Surgeon’s General Warning
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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| Well done |
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Re: Surgeon’s General Warning
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:47:01 PM AEST
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Lots of different emotions flowing throughout this write...Seems very personal. Good job.
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Re: Surgeon’s General Warning
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:07:44 PM AEST
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Awesome jyss..
I hear ya..
(stuffin "it" down our throats they are)
they're the true leaders..they should act as such..but will never.
guess it's up to us.
B |
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Re: Surgeon’s General Warning
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:05:50 AM AEST
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| i love your originality, and that is what will always set you apart from all the other poets i read. as a lot of the poets i come across are very uninteresting in their poems, yet your poems are anything but. |
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