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Lost Identity
Contributed by
usualbeauty
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look into the eyes of this broken being
Through the appearance in which you only think that you're seeing
A girl in control of this life that she's leading
Disguising a crooked sense of pride left bleeding
Out of the scars slain accross flesh to remind her
Of a time seemed so masked by reality's blur
Lost in the moment forever engraved in her mind
Wishing for miracles if only a chance to rewind
To a present that lacks a shivering spine
When ever word spoken doesn't seem like a line
Of deciet drenched in lies leaving you to believe
That nothing and no one is what they all seem
It's hard to believe that after all these years
You've yet to come to terms with all of your fears
Of finding yourself whether broken or strong
Of finding your own identity where only you can belong
Copyright ©
usualbeauty
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2005-07-11 17:56:59]
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Re: Lost Identity
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by imagenuinefake on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:20:11 PM AEST
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| Wow, very emo. I can really relate to it... |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:23:41 PM AEST
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| great poem, very emotional |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by secretwind on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:07:07 PM AEST
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yes
nothing is what it seems
great flow |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:31:54 AM AEST
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| I know all too well, as I am sure many others do, about what it feels like when everything seems like a lie no matter how bad you want to believe it. Very nice poem. |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:21:02 PM AEST
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very nice write! all the lines captured my attention til the very end... the ending four lines really struck me as strong.
keep up the good work!
dw |
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