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-restless in the rain-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:28:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I saw her crying on a park bench said she was a hollywood starlette young and restless screaming in the rain. I asked her 'what's the problem kid' said she needed an honest stranger someone to effect someone to remember her she said she'd starve before she ever went hungry again we walked in a down pour of our mood, talked about love talked about fear and what we were afraid to love we talked all night and sang to the rising sun, we screamed to let everyone know we were there infecting the city with life morning came and she said 'keep your head up kid cos' times are hard and thanks for yours fight for what you believe in but remember in war young men die while old men talk and we are the envy of the God's we could be dead tomorrow making today beautiful.
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Re: -restless in the rain-
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:47:29 PM AEST (User
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not bad.....free writes are sometimes easier.....liked the whole of it
Brew~ |
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